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A. Blodgett's avatar

Well written, stomach turning. lol There are a few stray quotation marks around, in case you want to give it a quick edit. Otherwise, all good.

Deep South Writer's avatar

Thank you so much!

Mala's avatar

I’m drooling (Not drooling lol) for the next bit.. šŸ˜‹

Sincerely Seb's avatar

Damn, what a twist! This was really well written my friend. Excellent work.